AUDIO NOTES ON YOUR FIRST TEN PAGES
If you can’t hook an industry reader in the first ten pages, they will abandon your script and all your toil will be for nothing.
Dominic Morgan will provide you with detailed audio notes on the first ten pages and teach you how to immerse the reader in your story and keep them turning the pages.
Your audio notes are designed to improve the readability and visuals of the first ten pages. They will also help you establish good writing practices which you can apply to the rest of your script and future projects.
THE FIRST TEN
Commentary on every scene and story beat
Character development & story structure
“Ballpark” plot suggestions and scene ideas
Line-by-line scene description edits
Line-by-line dialogue edits
Scene description suggestions and fixes
Dialogue suggestions and fixes
Cinematic “show don’t tell” suggestions & fixes
Page design and reader optimization suggestions and fixes
Story premise & logline analysis
THE FIRST TEN - AUDIO NOTES £295
Dominic will deliver your audio notes within 7-14 working days, barring scheduling conflicts. In the event he is unable to meet the 14-day timeframe, he will notify you within 24 hours of purchase to offer an alternative delivery date or a full refund.
24-48 hour turnaround available with a £150 rush fee. Please email dom@scriptfella.com to arrange.
— SARA DINGA - SCREENWRITER
HAVE A QUESTION?
E-mail Dominic at dom@scriptfella.com